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Duration: 04:44 minutes Upload Time: 2007-09-29 13:20:09 User: dannyknapp :::: Favorites :::: Top Videos of Day |
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Description: a love song |
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| MikeHelmsMusic ::: Favorites 2007-09-30 00:40:57 And that's what it'll take.. Time.. Patience.. and practice....I'll tell ya what... I'll watch ya get better too..! ;) __________________________________________________ | |
| hiddentalent123 ::: Favorites 2007-10-01 18:49:26 I think your songs have potential. Sometimes it takes months or even years before I have a song like I want it. Keep working on the song and remember to keep a strong hook line. I like the chord progression on this song though it sounds like the action on your guitar may be a little high. Good clear chords would make a big difference in the song. __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-01 18:56:26 thanx, u have a good ear because that guitar has very high action, bad intonation, and very old strings, lol. I don't think I'm going to use it anymore. __________________________________________________ | |
| coolanddark ::: Favorites 2007-10-02 12:26:51 you are a fantastic songwriter,and i mean that.like this one a lot! __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-02 13:02:03 thanx Dan, In hindsite I should have recorded it in a different key to suit my voice better. I'm quickly learning that it's very important to perform the tunes as well as possible. I can't just expect people to hear em like i do in my head. __________________________________________________ | |
| quietpainter ::: Favorites 2007-10-06 12:38:38 Sure you will improve! Other artists can see through that inexperience because they've been there. This great song could use another verse I think. Also, kierstenmh is looking for a songwriter I think. __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-06 18:52:38 thanx for the encouragement and the tips, got a trainload of tunes coming, and a few surprises. __________________________________________________ | |
| notfromtheseparts ::: Favorites 2007-10-08 01:07:54 I don't know that I'm good enough to be giving advice, but the chord changes are cool in this one too. I agree with hiddentalent123 that stronger backup would help greatly for making the vocals mix well. __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-08 09:27:12 thanx, maybe i'll give it another shot __________________________________________________ | |
| Cliffbrock ::: Favorites 2007-10-20 01:39:28 Hey Danny, This a beautiful love song and as good or better than any I've ever written. Great lyrics and easy to see it's written from your Heart. 5 Stars ! I'm glad I subscribed to your site bro'. Rod __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-21 01:19:28 well, i gotta disagree with u on that. but I'm glad u liked it. __________________________________________________ | |
| TomMeirose ::: Favorites 2007-10-30 20:49:04 You gotta be shittin' me! This is a great tune! I always love your lyric. But this one in particular has a fantastic melody, and a great chord pattern to back it up. And I know the sound of someone's voice is a subjective thing, but I've always liked yours...we all hit a clinker or two now and again. Don't sweat it. This one's a five, Danny. __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-10-31 19:07:51 thanx buddy, I've been playing this down a full step now. and it's working better, cept the E chord is now a D and just doesn't have the ummph I want. __________________________________________________ | |
| rtutt123 ::: Favorites 2007-11-20 22:45:00 Cool Danny...you have a new subscriber..RT __________________________________________________ | |
| dannyknapp ::: Favorites 2007-11-20 22:48:29 wow, thank you. __________________________________________________ | |
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