Tuesday, September 4, 2007

The poet in me

Duration: 04:56 minutes
Upload Time: 07-08-05 00:32:13
User: SupaDupaFlyGirl
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Hey there! Here is a poem I wrote! Its copyrighted so dont even try anything: THE DOOR I found myself in the dark crawling on the floor searching for an escape reaching for the door .. i touched the brass knob and got chills up my spine i stood face to face to the door it was just us this time .. the door seemed to represent another part of something missing a piece i could not find my ears began to listen .. at the touch of the knob i was overwhelmed with emotion the other side was a world fully spinning in motion .. i wanted to open that door to see the other side but something held me back what was this door to hide? .. Then i noticed a peep hole and a light shining through so i put my eye against it and images came into view .. how beautiful the other side was so peaceful and calm that is the side i should be on i knew this all along .. as i peered through the hole i saw a ray of light it seemed to beam straight to me and latch on with great might .. while i was inside this ray pictures flashed through my mind i saw myself smiling and happy a part of me i wanted to find why did you do that? the ray began to question you care for him, no? did you learn your lesson? .. with every ounce of dignity i have i said that is quite a mountain to overcome you sure have tested your innerself said the ray yes i know but we can climb this mountain .. fate plays a part in the way the system works but ultimately you are the ringleader do not be afraid to be angry with yourself now look past this and plant a good seed here .. in a fraction of a moment the room got dark i could not see through the anymore i took a step back and soon realized i was now on the otherside of the door.

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4monkiman4 ::: Favorites
who hit what home run?
07-08-23 11:40:47
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mauiportal ::: Favorites
come to maui
07-08-10 04:34:40
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SupaDupaFlyGirl ::: Favorites
thanks so much I am glad you enjoyed this :)
07-08-09 16:43:20
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Tiffany0x ::: Favorites
Wow. I love this poem so much! You definitely have true talent! ^^ I've been watching your videos for a long time!
07-08-08 19:43:11
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SupaDupaFlyGirl ::: Favorites
Thats exactly how I feel :)
07-08-06 09:57:35
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cmoney0206 ::: Favorites
That was very well put. So true, but there are always new doors open so I never have to be in the dark.
07-08-06 04:55:13
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MarcusKratosFenix ::: Favorites
I did enjoy it. It's just like your account name says--"SupaDupa". :-)
07-08-06 02:35:20
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SupaDupaFlyGirl ::: Favorites
aw that means so much to me!! I am glad you enjoyed it
07-08-06 01:42:12
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manonfire252525 ::: Favorites
awsome job!!! i liked it some much i watched it 3 times.
07-08-06 00:18:21
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SupaDupaFlyGirl ::: Favorites
thank you
07-08-05 22:51:10
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